I've had several incarnations of my Tysy character, but I
think they all really boil down to two. Which one do you
think I've done a better job of writing and RP'ing, and why?
(Note: I want to be a published writer someday, so this is
why I live for such feedback! :) Also, I'm going to start a
new dialogue-based RP thread using the one you guys
vote for.)

Your exile character is well written. Keep up the good work.